Do you know that early English poets were called shapers? People who used “the stuff of language to create stories the way that God, the Great Shaper, formed heaven and earth.” (p.68, writing tools) Isn’t that neat? To think of yourself as a shaper, one who can build life into what we write.
Think on that a spell. What would you need to be that sort of writer? Think of how God created the word. He chose the order carefully, creating the structure before creating the life that fills it.
He didn’t just say “let there be animals”, What he said was “Let the earth bring forth living creatures according to their kinds—livestock and creeping things and beasts of the earth according to their kinds.”
Do you see how he chose his words wisely? Describing what he wanted, where it was to come from, and giving us an image to hold in our minds’ eye. As writers we need to do the same. Just as we need to let our key words stand on their own, we need make sure we aren’t limiting our words to what is easy or “dumbed down” for our readers.
As writers we tend to have a rich vocabulary, so we aught to use it. Not to fill every space with a fancy word, because you don’t need big words to do the job. You just need the RIGHT one for the space it occupies.

How to Choose the Right Word?
There are several ways to choose what word you need. Perhaps these methods will help you to be choosing words wisely.
- Use a thesaurus to remind you of options. A good thesaurus is worth it’s weight in gold.
- Keep word and phrase choice that fits the context. Try not to be overly repetitive, search for words or phrases in your transcript that you use too often and switch them up.
- Listen for what sounds right. Read your words over, let them roll through your mind.
- The precise word isn’t necessarily the right word. Sometimes close it just what you need to fit the context and tone.
- The most powerful words tend to be the shortest and most basic in the English language. Winston Churchill said: “Broadly speaking, the short words are best, and the old words best of all.” Frankly though, if the best word you can use to communicate your tone and point is a longer one, use it, and use it confidently.
- Keep a list of descriptive words. Words that have caught your fancy, delight your mind, or just intrigues.
- Seek out words that evoke an emotional response, they may be simple or complex. They need to fit the mood and situation.
- Be specific where needed. Perhaps you need to say “Mountain Dew” instead of pop, or Malinois rather than dog.
Be the writer you want to be. Search out and gather words to yourself. Expand your pool of usable words. Learn the history behind the words that interest you. Incorporate them into your language and your writing. Choosing words wisely will further your abilities.
Be a writer.

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Choosing the best words to tell a story, describe well, and convey meaning is so important! I spent a lot of time working on this with my students in two high school writing courses. It’s sort of an art and a knack, but it does come with practice too!
it’s amazing how changing just one word can make more or less of an impact and completely change the meaning of a sentence. Deliberate word choice makes so much sense doesn’t it?
We did an exercise not too long ago about word choice and it was very interesting. Changing the word to see what changes in your understanding is fun.
it can be hilarious to see how word changes make such a difference
Excellent reminders for our writing, Annette! I love the concept of poets as shapers. I’ve never heard that before. Thanks!
I know, isn’t it a neat way to think about poets? Shapers.. I love it! 🙂
I really like how you tie in the God choosing the right words to us as writers picking the write words. Sometimes with the ease of delete buttons I feel people don’t take the time to choose the proper words any more. Good post. Thank you.
Thank you Kristen. Choosing words isn’t always as easy as we’d like to think it is. Being able to rely on another to help is is the best thing ever.