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Simplification is Best

February 11, 2019 By Annette1 9 Comments

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I have a niece that I really like talking to.  She wrote an art piece for the blog a bit back, and she’s a burgeoning author.  She’s an articulate young lady and recently she is needing to put together a one page synopsis of her book.  Taking ALL that information, and finding a way to put it on one page.  She’s needing to simplify, and as I read this chapter in Writing Tools, I am learning that simplification is best.

Simplification is best - making complex writing easier

We have a new Brazilian student living with us this week.  He’s a nice boy, but like the one who just left, his English leaves something to be desired, but UNLIKE him, he has a better command of written English.

Whenever a new student arrives I am reminded that using small words and slowing down the cadence of my speech, assists in understanding.  (and when all else fails, Google Translate is our friend).  ๐Ÿ™‚  There is so much that is new that it can be overwhelming.  Canadian society and mannerisms is a complex organism that takes time to digest.

It’s the same when we write.  When we have a complex situation or problem, making it simple helps your reader.

Prefer the Simple over the Technical

Assuming that you are not writing for a technical audience, clarity with simpler words and shorter sentences, better helps your reader understand the material.

Rather than using longer words, use shorter.  Make your points plain.   Doesn’t mean you need to talk stupid, or down to people, you are just using the words you need to make it plain, and therefore easier for your readers to understand. 

Simplicity can also be conveyed, through the use of words that spark the imagination.  A careful, complex crafting, using plain english, that melds the imagination into a complex whole.

Remember your first decision…. you want to inform people of something, whether it’s fiction, non-fiction, poetry, or prose.

What you are doing now is using your words, your short, concise, imaginatively complex words, to convey your thoughts.  You are helping your reader understand your words in as clear a manner as you can.

How to do that?

The more you know your topic, the more time you spend with it, making sure you know all the minutiae of it.  The clearer you can be in writing it.  I saw this often when my hubby was putting together a sermon.  He’d complain that it wasn’t coming together and then say… I need to study and research it more.

It’s hard work to do the reporting, researching, and critical thinking. It’s impossible to make things clear to your readers if it’s not clear in your own head.   Do the work and then tell your readers “here’s the message”.

Then What?

  1. Revise your work.  Study the words you use, can they be shorter, more concise?
  2. Any complicated passages that you can rewrite?
  3. Is there additional research that you need to do to make the matter more clear for your readers?
Give Keys Words Their Space
Make Your Work the Best it can be: Revise!

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  1. Karen Hoskins says

    February 13, 2019 at 8:28 am

    I was smiling as I was reading your post. I need to Simplify both while writing and especially while talking.

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    • Annette1 says

      February 14, 2019 at 12:50 am

      I KNOW eh? I was speaking to myself as much as anyone else. ๐Ÿ™‚

      Reply
  2. Lori says

    February 15, 2019 at 11:38 pm

    Simplifying and smaller words/sentences – tough to do sometimes when we have been taught (and are teaching) the use of stronger and more descriptive words and phrases. I find this head butting of ideas interesting. I guess there is a place for both, right?

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    • Annette1 says

      February 16, 2019 at 11:16 pm

      it’s not a matter of using stronger, more descriptive word or not… it’s more of using simpler words to help people understand complex ideas better. There is definitely a place for both.

      Reply
  3. Dawn says

    February 17, 2019 at 9:01 pm

    I think it s really neat that you have a foreign student staying with you. Such a learning experience for everyone.

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    • Annette1 says

      February 17, 2019 at 9:11 pm

      we do it every year, this is our first year having them back to back

      Reply
  4. Kym says

    February 19, 2019 at 8:09 am

    It’s tempting to use big or fancy words to sort of “prove” how smart we are, isn’t it? But it can backfire, so I agree that simpler is usually better. Even in our fiction writing course, we’re finding this. Our chapter this week includes this quote from George Orwell: “Never use a long word where a short one will do.”

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  5. Margaret says

    February 21, 2019 at 8:27 pm

    Writing is something that is so difficult for me, yet somehow I became a blogger. I hope that I will grow into it one day… We had exchange students my entire youth through the Lions Club. I definitely believe I was enriched by it and I hope they were too.

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    • Annette1 says

      February 21, 2019 at 9:41 pm

      it’s surprising how the exchange students worm their way into our lives. They leave a lasting impact for good or ill. ๐Ÿ™‚ It’s funny how sometimes we are called to a job that doesn’t seem to fit well.. which causes us to grow to fit it. Keep writing Margaret.

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